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Clark
11-09-2001, 09:14 PM
Prologue:
High Tides

The Batboat screamed down the river after a speedboat that had held up Veronica Vreeland's charity bash on her hired ocean liner. Hard on the controls, Batman swerved to miss an oncoming tourist boat. In the boat ahead, one of the three thugs pulled out a tommy gun and started to blaze away at the Batboat. In the seat next to Batman, Robin shook his head.
"Amateur." Tim said.
As if the guy heard Robin, he dropped his gun and pulled out a grenade launcher and fired a round at the Batboat. It didn't hit, but it sprayed water everywhere. Batman nearly hit another boat in the confusion.
"****ing hell." He said as he made a right turn to follow the villians. A minute later, they entered Gotham Harbour. There were big cargo ships everywhere. The Batboat weeved in and out of the ships as it chased the other boat. As they cleared the cargo carriers, the guy with the grenade launcher fired another three rounds. This caused water to spray everywhere. After a few seconds of confusion, the Batboat came about. Batman and Robin saw the boat pull up to a jetty. The thugs then scrambled to a nearby car. It took off, but not before the two crime fighters saw the Joker stick his middle finger up at them, laughing as he did so.

Batgirl
11-12-2001, 02:52 PM
Nice intro. I loved Tim's line. So like of him to say that... Who knew he had a grenade launcher? Wouldn't it figure... Hey, good job, keep it up.

JLU Dude
11-30-2001, 10:09 PM
This was very good. Hope you continue it soon.

Oracle
12-01-2001, 05:25 PM
I must have completely missed this when it was first posted. Please keep posting Clark. This has great potential. :)

Clark
12-02-2001, 05:02 PM
Originally posted by Oracle
I must have completely missed this when it was first posted. Please keep posting Clark. This has great potential. :) .


Well guys, I'm still thinking out the next chapter. Please give me time.

SilverKnight
12-03-2001, 11:56 AM
Not bad. Not bad at all.