S.E.R.R.A.M #2: Completed

[vrempire]

Hi friends,
I have just completed my S.E.R.R.A.M #2 comic.There are 45 pages totally.
Please click this picture to go there directly:
http://www.serram.com/image/thumb/SERRAM_2_cover.jpg (http://www.serram.com/comic/episode_1/index_episode_1.php?pages=0&episode=2)
Hope to hear your comments and critiques.
If you like it, please fill the simple form below it (name and e-mail) so I can inform you of any latest news of S.E.R.R.A.M.
Thank you for ur support..
Happy reading..
:)

[Rune]

Very nice work indeed Vrempire, you've done a great job, especially where the consistency of characters is concerned. The little touches of humour are a treat too and the ending ... well does this mean we have part 3 to look forward too?

Very nice stuf indeed.

[James]

A good read. Surprisingly long - we're talking 40 odd pages here.. which is good and bad.. I think it's great that you offer so much, possibly bad as it may put people off being so long.. I would have thought 20-25 pages ample.

Odd but interesting story. I liked the comic touches that floated in here and there and there were some nice backdrops and character expressions. A little more definition between leads would be really cool as a possible suggestion, but the bug was pretty menacing and actually made my skin crawl at points.

Some fun black humour, pulp action and a little grizzliness should keep most comic fans amused. Your art style is an interesting mix. I look foward to seeing how this progresses.

[vrempire]

Hi guys,
I have just added Page 11 today.
http://www.vrempire.com/serram/image/comic/SERRAM_Pg_11.jpg (http://www.serram.com/)
I am still in the progress of learning how to be consistent in my work.
Right now, I'm trying to publish 2 pages per week (Monday and Thursday).
Feel free to read and give comment.
:)

[vrempire]

Hi guys,
I've just added Page 12 just now.

http://vrempire.com/serram/image/comic/SERRAM_Pg_12.jpg
(http://www.serram.com/)
Please comment and enjoy..
:)

[vrempire]

Hi guys,
I've just added Page 13 just now.
http://vrempire.com/serram/image/comic/SERRAM_Pg_13.jpg (http://www.serram.com/)
Sit back, relax and enjoy..
Appreciate any comment.
:)

[vrempire]

Hi guys,
I've just added Page 14 just now.
http://vrempire.com/serram/image/comic/SERRAM_Pg_14.jpg (http://www.serram.com/)
After this I plan to just add one page per week so I can have more time to
study on how to improve my comic.
Wish me luck, guys..
:)

[vrempire]

Hi guys,
I've just added Page 15 just now.
http://vrempire.com/serram/image/comic/SERRAM_Pg_15.jpg (http://www.serram.com/)
I've got many complaints about my English.
Hopefully this time it will improve a little bit although not 100% 'Good Enough'.
:)

[vrempire]

Hi guys,
I've just added Page 16 just now.
http://vrempire.com/serram/image/comic/SERRAM_Pg_16.jpg (http://www.serram.com/)
This is the beginning of the next scene. Hope I am improving from the previous scene.
But one building in the first panel really look off-the perspective.
Only when I see it in the digital format, it looks "AAARRRGGHHH!!!".
I'll modified it if I have free time.
:(